Marissa Lingen (mrissa) wrote,
Marissa Lingen
mrissa

Get it right.

Notes to self:

1) "She put her dark hair in a bun" is very different from "she put a bun in her dark hair." A sticky bun? A cinnamon bun? A rosemary bun? Put her hair in a bun, but leave the bread products out of her hair.

2) It is a very different thing for a character to say, "I do have a life outside the university," than, "I do have a life outside the universe."

Huh. Maybe the latter is the story I should be writing instead.
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